The Auction and The Warrior Dancer

Well, soon will be the Peninsula School Auction. The Auction is held every year, although no children are invited except the eighth graders, who are invited as a sign of passage to the adult world. Well, it sounds like fun!
In Dance today, we talked about the warrior dancer, and danced, and let each of our warrior dancers out. I wrote somthing on it, here it is:

I lie with my back to the hard, wood, floor. My eyes are closed, but slowly the music goes. When my eyes open, I see so perfectly, the gold dust falling, falling, on top of me.
I sit up, as the power whirls in my heart. It whirls round and round until it is released. I am dancing, in an endless chamber of dancers, but I do not see them. I see the dust, gold and glittering, and dance, as the new power I have never felt comes.
I now have courage! To do as I please! I cannot stop, for when I do, all will end. I must be solid, I must be dainty, I must be elegant, I must be pretty. I must not go, beyond what I see. But when I dance, the warrior dancer comes out of me.

I think my writing is improving. Better write more!!!!! By the way, i love comments on my writings. It helps me keep in touch with how they are.

oh! and I have been reserching dance schools on the coastside, got two im gonna look into!